The Insanity Continues

So, I have been bitten by a Stiles/Derek Teen Wolf bunny with a Soul Mate plot.

In the story, everyone gets their Soul Mark when they turn twelve. I have started with Stiles and was originally going to have it completely from his POV but Derek decided he wants his story told too.

At first I was writing it in their alternating POVs, starting with when their Soul Mark first appears. If I do that, would it make it seem like they're the same age and born on the same day? In this the age gap between them is the same as on the show, so about six years.

Or should I write one chapter in Stiles' POV and another in Derek's?

I am in need of some assistance.

I've gotten bit by a bunny based off a gifset of Stiles being beat up by Allison's grandfather.

I posted part of it a couple of weeks ago hoping that would make the bunny go away.

No such luck.

I've written a bit more and while I am in love with several of the images I've written (Derek gently lifting Stiles' head to examine his wounds; pressing his head against Stiles' knees and just breathing for a moment once he's sure he's safe), I'm not confident in it because I've never written this fandom before and don't even really read it, either.

So, what I'm in need of is someone to give me some feedback. I am just looking for someone to tell me what works and what doesn't. Grammar is not important at this time. Character voice and how well it reads is very important.

If you're willing to assist, drop me a PM and I'll send you the link to the Google docs. Or I can email you the word doc, if you'd prefer.

I had a good day today.

In case you’re not aware, I haven’t written anything (with the exception of the Rodney/Ronon story I wrote during Squee Weekend) in over a year. But today I got hit by a bunny that insisted I write it down.

I’m not sure how many pages I hand wrote but it was several. I can’t wait to type it up... which will have to wait because I left the pages at work. *sigh*

BUT I have finally conquered my writer’s block!